We worked on the papers a bit more today. You should come to class tomorrow with the claim and most of the body paragraphs typed up. We'll be think about adding the introduction and the conclusion paragraphs tomorrow in class.
Make sure you are developing the tier one aspects of the paper before developing tier two.
Topic One : Show how Sameness is developed and then explain how it benefits the Community.
Topic Two: Show how pain is used or avoided in the Community and then discuss whether it is hypocritical.
Topic Three: Show three ways Jonas has changed and then explain why those changes are significant.
Topic Four: Show what is right and wrong with the Community and then come to a conclusion on the quest for perfection.
Topic Five: Show how parents can raise their children better by loving them (or show how they would do a worse job by loving them) by sharing experiences from the book and your own life.
Proofread your ideas aloud too. Too many times I've read sentences that just don't make sense. You can identify precise and vivid sentences. Now write them.
See you soon.
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